All Comments on 'A Mother and Son Journey Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
spare us

Spare us with chapter two. Chapter one put me to sleep, and was just plain aweful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I'm in.

I especially like how mom is not some perfect clone of a Playboy bunny. Looking forward to reading more of how Mother and son close the distance between them. Pieater

Gitano71Gitano71over 14 years ago
Enjoyable

I enjoyed it.

Bring out Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Tension

Excellent build-up of tension between son and mother while not overly straining our credulity.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A really fine start to a very erotic story

I hope that it doesn't take too long for him to fuck his mom. I want to see him stretch her pussy out and with his youthful energy, wear her pussy out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nicely done.

Don't dally with the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Bush?

Moms her age usually have a thick bush with a few gray hairs mixed in. What a story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
"I had given a white sticky tribute to my mom."

This is a great story of a son who's so hot for his mother that he keeps jerking his big dick whenever he's around her and jizzing in his pants. He winds up doing what plenty of boys'd love to do--hauling out his big stiff prick right in front of his mommy and whacking off till he blows his balls all over the place. Mom really likes what she's seeing. I wonder what could possibly come next.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
A classic

with promise of things to come

jcus0511jcus0511almost 3 years ago

What a lovely start to this story.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Nice story; however, I likecharacter development. I like personal relationship development.

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