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Very fine
A beautifully executed piece of fun. Seriously good writing.
Great!
I am VERY excited to read more! Clever, good writing!
Enjoyed your story, but
it begs for a least one more chapter. Please don't make us wait too long. Good writing, very good flow, and very interesting. Grabbed and kept my attention with the first paragraph. I would like to see more, including the fleshing out of the characters. Good work, keep it up and thanks.
Fine Start
We will be coming along for the ride.. It was a bit on the short side, though.
Thanks for your feedback!
"Blind Date" was written for an under-2500-words, slice-of-life-romance contest several years ago. At this time, I don't plan to add to it. That could change if inspiration occurs later. I do apologize for not letting you know that up front. (I intended to but forgot.)
Thanks for your kind comments and votes, and for adding my story to your Favorites. All are truly appreciated.
excellent
Every once in a while, there's a gem like this story in the slush pile of new stories.
I'm sorry to hear that there's no follow-up, as the ending did seem to be a bit abrupt (and now I know why).
But maybe one day we'll see a new story?
Excellent Work,
Darlin, but you sure do leave the ending hanging out there in the open!
Great fun, great wit, joy to read!
Another delicious read and rockin premise. I love your stuff and look forward to popping in for a read!
More!!
Give us a little more. This would be an awesome story to finish...
Great writing!
Good story
Really wish there was a second chapter though the story just kind of ends
good story
Continue plz!!!
I think if there hasn't been a 2nd chapter
in 6 years, it's not going to happen. too bad, it started well.
You're a different kinda writer
terse I guess but I like your stuff and wish there was more of it ... Scotty
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