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by Levitating_Bed10/15/09

This is very good.

...Kind of like eating pancakes at four in the morning after one of the best nights out you've ever had, except with the simple elegance worthy of a princess.

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by EroticOrogeny10/16/09

accepance

of disappointment is what I read here.
Nice job

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by Anonymous10/16/09

expections

and its limits show through...sighs...bluerains

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