Sis-in-law Incentives Ch. 12

Good job!

I really enjoyed this series and am glad you circled back and briefly touched on Holly's infidelity to tie up that loose end. Keep up the good work!

Thank You for an incredible series

I knew Holly cheated, I just knew it. Loved how they are all going to stay together. I encourage you to write another series with the same people, I've come to care for them a Great deal. And can't wait for another submission from you.

Always a pleasure

You're awesome. Can't say much more, except that I look forward to any future chapters in the sagas you're already aware of.

OMG!

I have been reading this series for a week. My wife and her girlfriend would thank you profusely if she knew this is why they've been getting it long, thick, and hard every night all night. You're a genious.

Very Nice

Once again,great story...the only thing that was a liitle much was how many times this guy could cum in such short times...no human can get it up that often and cum that much...otherwise great work!!

Great Series

Really good series. Just had to keep reading till the early hours to see how it ended. Keep up the great work.

Still awesome

It took me a while to get into this series: I found it a little too derivative of your earlier Jen & Me story, and I still struggle with the whole sneaking around behind the back of someone you love. I think the ending makes up for it though, and I have to admit the sharing element really works for me as a fantasy. Well written as always: a few editorial glitches, but I like your use of language and the story line. By the end of the series, I was won over to the point of giving you 5 stars.

But What About

Holly and Denise and the "Reward Weekend"?

Aside from that, keep 'em coming (cumming?)

First series i ever read because i wanted to know what happens.

The only thing i am still interested in, was when and with who Holly cheated on Alex.

I loved the character of Jenny. Props to you.

Terrific story

I loved the whole set up. The part with Jenny's early infatuation was genius.
The only thing I would have liked to see was a little less of the continuous resurgent hard-ons, and a little more detail about Holly's infidelities.
Over all, one of my favourite series on ever. I haven't voted on any of them yet so I'm gonna go back and vote on each story

thanks

I enjoy reading your stories and hope you do more

Continue

Please dont stop, I am addicted to this story, keep continuing on it...

That was HOT

THANKS, STORY WAS GREAT, ENJOYED IT.

Hot Damn

I'm going to order my hitachi wand right now!!!

You are the best!

You are definitely my favorite writer on Lit. I read lots of stories, all different genre, and vote after each one, but by far my favorite author is Tx Tall Tales! I too live in Texas, and I think we are close in age, so I like to think that I have met you at some point in time, but just don't know you write on Lit! I have enjoyed all your series, and all your short stand alones too. CvN is a great story line, although a little far-fetched, but that's what makes it fun. Pool Payments and Sis-in-law are much more believable, and for that reason are probably a little more fantasy fodder for me, although I can't quite figure out how I could get my husband and I to live out some of this stuff and still have "normal" lives with three kids and all that goes with it!

I am glad that you take the time to write so many wonderful tales for us, your appreciative readers. Keep up the great work!

sisters

are you planning on continueing this story or is it done?

Damn

Fantastic story thank you please by all mean keep up the amazing work. Wow

Best Saga Story Ever!!

Honestly, I'm starting to think every chick name Holly is a cheating slut. Anyways, long story short I paid her back with her best friend.

P.S. I know it's a story only, but in my mind I wish Alex treated her like whore and told Jenny she was her senior Wife and lover, not that second plate trash Holly. Lol:P

Sex/Love

Great writing, very enjoyable story. Regardless of how great the sex is, the love is the cement that in the end holds this series together, and that's the secret ingredient that lifts this series to another level, IMHO. Once again, outstanding job.

Loved it, as usual!

You are the man, my idol. As a fellow Texan, I salute you, even considering the fact that you are a sick and twisted pervert. From someone who has been there and done that, I enjoy your stories as being very realistic and believable. Well at least 90% believable!

Great story and great writting

Loved the story and how it unfolded. Yeah, I am sure you can get a couple more chapters out of it and it would still be great. The Mexico trip could be a chapter in itself.

Thanks for your great writing.

Great Stuff!

I've read a few of your series now, and I'm a huge fan! Just wanted to give ya another thumbs up :)

Good writing is....

This.
Clear to read, realistic action, thoughts, emotions, sometimes animal nature takes over, but with some control.

I love realistic doubts in characters, drives and fear in balance.

I have a wonderful partner like Holly, and count myself lucky. Nearly messed it all up, but now value that freedom even more.
Can't wait to read your other work!

Impossibly great!

You're a erotic writing hero! I read the entire series in one marathon Saturday session, and still want MORE!
My heartfelt admiration, sir!

Agree with Others

This is a great story. I, too, am a fellow Texan. I've had the good fortune to have an open sexual relationship with my wife's two sisters, all with my wife's blessings. But even though all the girls are bisexual, they've never had sex with each other...that I know of anyway.

I really got my rocks off with chapter 12!

Bill Lanier

This is a very sex filled story

This was a very good story, and I gave 5 stars at every step. Personally, I enjoy stories with less sex, and more character development, but for those who love to read the sex scenes, this story is among the best; there is a lot of sex, for sure.

Amazing tales (or is that "tails"?)

I started with TMTH. I added it as a favorite story, and you as a favorite author. Then I found this story. I actually prefer the shorter installments.

Please keep up the good work. This is a superb story. If only I could move these ideas from fantasy to reality!

I usually avoid stories with many chapters, just lazy, I guess.

However, I read the first chapter and I was sucked in (to coin a phrase). I agree with the main character deciding to be faithful to his wife and one other except for the parties where everything and everyone was open game. Personally I was never involved with but two women at a time and my wife bowed out of the sex part in 1998. She was not fully aware of the relationship I had with the other but never asked. She had told me many years ago that if she ever asked me something like that again (I admitted to an indiscretion once and she didn't like knowing) to just lie about it so I have done so if anything ever came up. Wise woman and we have been together a loooooong time. Thank you for writing this story.

I am getting too old for much of that stuff now but it was surely fun while it lasted.

Great series

I gotta say, this truly is an awesome series. I generally don't read long ones like this. I usually actually just watch something or read a very short story and call it good. But this one was really good. I actually got into the story line. Im gonna read some more of ur work now. Hope its as good. Thank u.

I really enjoyed this one

I gave it a "5", I would have loved to hear how Tammy could have fit into the mix. She could have been a "for fun only/non-serious" participant who was comfortable moving on. I also would have not minded Beth giving Eric the boot and moving into an unconventional relationship with Dawn and JT as well.

I can see how it was a good place to end it though. It is a great fantasy and an awesome read.

Bravo. Bravo. Encore

read all 12 in one day. Great stuff. You are definitely one of my favorite authors

Great tale

Thanks for tying up the important loose ends about Holly and Jenny, and not letting Alex be so stupid as to mess up his incredible new fantasy life. Who wouldn't want to be him right now!

Wife cheating

This guy must be pretty slow. I knew his wife was cheating way back when she came into the bedroom and dropped to her knees to give him a blowjob. But with him already giving it to sis n law I thought he was gonna leave her. Good thing he didn't .

Illustrated

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