by MaiDawtons
Nice story once again Mai. You certainly have a vivid way of telling a story or event. Keep them coming you are doing a great job. Well written as well.
Mai This develops nicely, I liked it a whole lot. Something about a woman who is in control, by giving that control up.
I think the trust that was shown really hit a spot with me. Once again Thanks, can't wait for a loooong chapter 5