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She Had Horns

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by Anonymous

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by manyeyedhydra10/18/09

Sexy little succubus tale

Gotta love a gal with horns. Nice twist at the end as well.

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by larry7440310/18/09

Great story...

The best I have read in some time.

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by Tagnikzuur10/18/09

more! . . .More!!. . .MORE!!!!

P-L-E-A-S-E! Please say there is more to this story!!! In fact, I KNOW it would make a FANTASTIC book! Please continue this story!

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by mBrow10/18/09

Fine Story

Thanks for your contribution, nicely done!

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by PompousBuffoon10/18/09

Excellent.

Excellent characterizations; masterful pacing; strong, erotic, sinister and original storyline. All around, one of the finest submissions in this genre!

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by AzPilot10/18/09

Absolutely fantastic!

I envy your imagination and writing ability.

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by Anonymous10/19/09

You Sir,
Can write. Nothing more need be said.

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by Perentie10/19/09

Prefer romances with succubi but great nonetheless

I applaud the original take on the ending. I really expected him to die like most lovers of succubi do in stories where they are evil. It does leave a lot of questions though so perhaps you'll make a sequel? For instance what was the point of him sucking her milk? It didn't seem needed to keep him under control so perhaps it enabled him to survive/heal from the fire?

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by Magus_Ronin10/21/09

Very original

A very interesting take on the succubus theme, I particularly like the twist ending. The party definitely reminded me of college.

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by PrincessErin11/08/09

Creepy

Creepy and weird and very good. Thank you for sharing.

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by Anonymous10/05/10

Continuation

Not bad, I'm wondering what happens next? If there is a continuation, I make this one suggestion; don't kill or harm Cabe, such stories get tiresome.

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by Anonymous02/14/11

!

i agree dont hurt him. but him in a bad situation and Muriel saving him would be awesome

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by Anonymous03/28/11

Superb

You've managed to both repulse and attract me all within the same story. Believe me, there aren't many authors or stories who can do that. Keep up the great work!

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by Alpineskier12/07/11

Horns? Really?

I am not into this type of story, but I loved this one - serving perhaps unrealistic questions never answered, yet continually moving forward into a realm visited by very few. Muriel's return was enjoyed, their child's appearance may be reaching too far. Thank you for this and all the stories you have shared with us.

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by Anonymous01/05/13

Nice imaginative Tale!

Where can I meet a beautiful Horny lady like Muriel?
Great surprise ending.

Thanks

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by Rhomanov03/10/13

Kept me entertained

Great flow, awesome ending!

Thx!!

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by Anonymous06/22/13

Please

Make a second part, if you want to of course...

I would love to see how this continues!

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by Hethen12911/05/13

Continue

You either continue this story or we riot. seriously well fucking done

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by Blackthorn111/08/13

Uh-oh....

Great... A demonic little girl.....

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by Anonymous02/15/14

RE:

"You either continue this story or we riot."
2nd that !

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by Anonymous05/05/14

Best erotic horror I've read! Anywhere. Sequel or riot!

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by csosh10/09/14

Best one in a long time

And re the other Anonymous' comments....Sequel or we WILL riot!!!!

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by lowkeyone02/04/16

FIVE

PLUS

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by Ambivalence02/26/16

OK, first, I liked this...

But you've almost created more questions than I had thought reasonable...

Why was HE alive...?
Why did she GET pregnant...?
Was getting pregnant an accident, planned, or (least believable) the norm for her interactions...?
What's next for THEM...?
What IS the child...?

Erf...

But my appetite is definitely whetted...

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by Anonymous04/16/16

Amazing

Absolutely awesome! Got me off and got me interested, will there be more chapters?

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by Tw0Cr0ws04/19/16

you sure he's up to this?

Seems to be a bit delicate natured for this.

Be interesting to see where it goes from here.

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by SPARTAN04712/08/17

Wow!

This is one of the most amazing nonhuman stories I've read here, I hope there'll be a sequel!

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by Oblimo05/03/18

A great read! My “reader’s instinct” was telling me Cabe would find horns on his own head that next Halloween as the corruption had been passed on. I was not suspecting progeny, but I prefer how you ended it. I think with the metaphor of the progeny of the “corrupt” union can be taken in many different directions so She Had Horns is a great candidate for continuation.

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by Anonymous05/05/18

Wow, just wow.

I really like this story and thought I would be disappointed and that Cabe would die, but no, you exceeded my expectations and created an amazing story with lots of exciting possibilities.
Thanks for writing this and thanks for sharing it with us.
If you ever continue this story you are sure to have a lot of readers.
Again, thank you,
Kronos.

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