All Comments on 'She Had Horns'

Gotta love a gal with horns. Nice twist at the end as well.

The best I have read in some time.

P-L-E-A-S-E! Please say there is more to this story!!! In fact, I KNOW it would make a FANTASTIC book! Please continue this story!

Thanks for your contribution, nicely done!

Excellent characterizations; masterful pacing; strong, erotic, sinister and original storyline. All around, one of the finest submissions in this genre!

I envy your imagination and writing ability.

You Sir,

Can write. Nothing more need be said.

I applaud the original take on the ending. I really expected him to die like most lovers of succubi do in stories where they are evil. It does leave a lot of questions though so perhaps you'll make a sequel? For instance what was the point of him sucking her milk? It didn't seem needed to keep him under control so perhaps it enabled him to survive/heal from the fire?

A very interesting take on the succubus theme, I particularly like the twist ending. The party definitely reminded me of college.

Creepy and weird and very good. Thank you for sharing.

Not bad, I'm wondering what happens next? If there is a continuation, I make this one suggestion; don't kill or harm Cabe, such stories get tiresome.

i agree dont hurt him. but him in a bad situation and Muriel saving him would be awesome

You've managed to both repulse and attract me all within the same story. Believe me, there aren't many authors or stories who can do that. Keep up the great work!

I am not into this type of story, but I loved this one - serving perhaps unrealistic questions never answered, yet continually moving forward into a realm visited by very few. Muriel's return was enjoyed, their child's appearance may be reaching too far. Thank you for this and all the stories you have shared with us.

Where can I meet a beautiful Horny lady like Muriel?

Great surprise ending.

Thanks

Great flow, awesome ending!

Thx!!

Make a second part, if you want to of course...

I would love to see how this continues!

You either continue this story or we riot. seriously well fucking done

Great... A demonic little girl.....

"You either continue this story or we riot."

2nd that !

Best erotic horror I've read! Anywhere. Sequel or riot!

And re the other Anonymous' comments....Sequel or we WILL riot!!!!

PLUS

But you've almost created more questions than I had thought reasonable...

Why was HE alive...?

Why did she GET pregnant...?

Was getting pregnant an accident, planned, or (least believable) the norm for her interactions...?

What's next for THEM...?

What IS the child...?

Erf...

But my appetite is definitely whetted...

Absolutely awesome! Got me off and got me interested, will there be more chapters?

Seems to be a bit delicate natured for this.

Be interesting to see where it goes from here.

This is one of the most amazing nonhuman stories I've read here, I hope there'll be a sequel!

A great read! My “reader’s instinct” was telling me Cabe would find horns on his own head that next Halloween as the corruption had been passed on. I was not suspecting progeny, but I prefer how you ended it. I think with the metaphor of the progeny of the “corrupt” union can be taken in many different directions so She Had Horns is a great candidate for continuation.

I really like this story and thought I would be disappointed and that Cabe would die, but no, you exceeded my expectations and created an amazing story with lots of exciting possibilities.

Thanks for writing this and thanks for sharing it with us.

If you ever continue this story you are sure to have a lot of readers.

Again, thank you,

Kronos.

Everything's bigger in Texas. Including, apparently, certain imaginations. Another well written and interesting story. I have only one objection, and that has to do with the use of the word "perky." By all means, never, EVER, type out that word again! Otherwise, another five star story.

You have written an excellent story here, one of the better Erotic Horror I have ever read and your writing style is fantastic. Did it ever occur to you that this would make the basis of a good continuing story; what is his ongoing relation ship with the female demon and what about raising a demon/human hybrid baby; lots of good potential here.

Well done. I've read this several times over the years, and it still gets high marks.

Tonite? Well, OMFG, this is a hot story.

As a therapist myself, I can imagine the work that has been done to "overcome" this "altered state experience". What the next session will be like depends entirely upon how this "anniversary of the event" plays out.

Even if you never draft a sequel (tough story to follow, I admit), I've enjoyed this and your other stories that I've read. You have a gift for writing. Not sure how far it extends, but judging by the comments, I'm not alone in praising your talent. Write! Anywhere, any genre, any site, any audience; write.

Not my usual fare, but well written. I almost didn't read this entry in the horror genre but like your writing style. Because of that... 5 *

Oh what an ending. No horns, now what?

Outstanding story!!!

Excellent with a Nice (?) twist at the end.

11/10!!!!!

It feels like quite a build-up to a sequel dear author. I hope that there will be one.

Cursed to be a demon,Uriel had to mate with a virgin on All Hallows Eve.

A year later time for daddy to meet his little girl.

Aww

I like it ❤️‍🔥 The last sentence: sublime, molten deliverance ☯️😈🫣🌋

Thank you 🌺🌸

Delicious story, delicious twist