All Comments on 'Our Steven, Our Stephanie Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I loved it

This was a great second start and can't wait till we get to some action and I also hope that you continue your other series as well as this one.

KonyhaKonyhaover 14 years ago
Intriguing and lots of possibilities

Steven's (physical, emotional and social) metamorphosis sounds like a really interesting story - as long as Vanessa knows what she's doing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What a wonderdul son or is that daughter to be

Nice story. Sexy with a nice beginning. Need more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SSSS Super Sexy Slutty Stephanie

OH such a loving mother to worry about her son so much she wants to turn him into a cock loving slut. I cant wait either to see where this is headed because as a young crossdresser I dreamed of this everytime I put on my mom's things and stroked myself while wanting her to catch me and telling me that if I wanted to be a lil slut then thats is what she would see to. Please hurry so Stephanie can find the joy's of sucking a big hard cock and losing her cherry...sally_spandex69 at yahoo dot com

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More parts the sooner the better

Hope you don't go down the predictable "cock loving slut" route with this. Done to death. Just seeing how he adapts to this and deals with the changes and the new look is alluring enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
maybe

Why should Vannessa need to know what she was doing? If she messes up it is not her life that will suffer. Think of all the fun she will have, not to mention to "fun" a non-volunteerting son will be put to. If he does not have fun that is his/her problem, not his "mother".

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not too far off....

Not too far off the mark although I could have done without the hypnotism that comes later Overall I loved it. The same things happened to me until I was 12 and I was forced to stop wearing my moms things but it was too late. My sister knew about it and brought her friends in my room to go through my drawers to see all her hand me downs that I loved to wear. I wish I would have had the courage or support to transition!!!

I wish you would have played more on the conflict of how Steve felt when it came to dealing with his sexuality. I do appreciate the way you compared it to a girls coming of age though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good beginning. This makes me tingle all over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Hey, very nice start!

Thanks!

best wishes

TK

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
fan

nice beginning. vanessa is very manipulative

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I wish it was me

If this happend to me then I would not have been going threw some of the problems of my life.

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLabout 8 years ago
Fucked up story IMHO

This story is not about Feminization. This is Child Abuse and should be labeled so.

NicoleAlldredgeNicoleAlldredgeabout 8 years ago
Keep writing

Keep going with story I am definitely enjoying it. However, I hope you allow everything happening to also contain truly caring individuals and not just turn it into a forced sissification void of any loving feelings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wished it were me!!

I dreamed of becoming feminine! I prayed that I would wake up a girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Better detail better story

It would bring the readers into the story if more details about Steven were given within the text of the story. His height weight hair color type of sneakers he wore. What hormones she was giving him. Where she got then

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story and Steven is adorable. His mother on the other hand is wicked even if her intentions are good it is still a wicked ack.

Veronica

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