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A Great Start!
Way to go Bob. Most of your stories are enjoyable, but this one is beginning to appear to be your best ever. Anxiously, I await future episodes with no expectations except to be entertained!
Truly Superb!
One of the very best: you are a WRITER! Surely your talents are worthy of a wider audience than Literotica's.
Yup,
JPB, I have read many of your stories, liked many of them, but somehow this one just seems to be something really cool. I really look forward to your next parts. This part was a very nice set up and really just has the feel of a special story.
1 of best starts ever for JPB... BUT
the ending is so bad... it is well shocking. Its clear that JPB wanted an ending that is really comes out of left field ... and it really ruins this story
Outstanding storytelling
Nice work Bob. The story is enjoyable from beginning to the continuation. You have left many intriguing possibilities for your story. I am truly looking forward to the ensuing chapters.
This is marvelous...
what and exciting story. can't wait for the next part.
Awesome!
A Great read for sure .... can't wait for the continuation and all that I'm sure it will offer!
I've read the ending
It was recently posted on the storiesonline.net, and, well, I did NOT like the ending.
The second chaper goes well but ends badly
It was good until you put him back with the slut wife. No way in hell. She is trash. She committed adultry, cheated, basically lied, took bareback sex, humiliated her husband on many levels, and in no way felt any remorse for her actions. It was a planned and deliberate act of unfaithfulness in her husbands bed. Sorry not a chance in hell.
Curious to see where this is going . . .
I haven't read SOL to see what's really happening; I've only read this part. Just an observation or two. Firstly, we never learned if Annalise gave the engagement ring back to Rob. Did she, or didn't she? Maybe it was in there somewhere and I missed it, but I don't think so. Secondly, I can't fathom any reason why a man who believes in fidelity would want to have a series of dates with a porn star who has been in the sack with God knows how many men. I suppose anyone is entitled to a fantasy but most of the time, a fantasy is way better than the reality -- in fact, reality can spoil a fantasy, so why do this? Well-written so far and I'm enjoying the flow -- I'm interested in seeing what's next.
I liked it so far.
So far it was very good and I really liked itI'd really appreciate if people who already read this story STOPrevealing the end
What neat story!!
This installment is great. I loved the lead-up to the main theme. Let's wait and see what the end looks like on this site before we criticize JPB, okay. Maybe he changed it from a previous posting on a different web site.
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My Redhead
My Redhead was a fantastic story about a husband that didn't know his wife was having an affair and one day she told him to find a girl friend because they had not been having sex. The wife kept after the husband until he finally made up someone he found and was having sex with but in reality he wasn't because he could not cheat on her. He continues to tell his wife of the wonderful sex he is having with his made for woman and one day she decides to tell him she has been having an affair for two years. I've read most of your stories but this is one that I would like to see another chapter which he deals with the knowledge that has been thrust upon him by his cheating wife. This is a extremely creative and original tale and I think only you could do it justice with another chapter on how the husband handles this unexpected and totally unknown information spoken from his (until now) faithful wife. I hope that you will give this some thought as I'm sure there are others that would like to see how he responds to this crushing knowledge. Thanks for writing and sharing. Yoda
There are no 11 inch cocks
Only 1% of cocks are equal to or greater than 8". Even John Holmes was only 8.75". Since the story is impossible, instead of 5***** I rated it 3***.
The idea that women prefer larger than normal cocks is preposterous and contrary to evolution and logic. Humans have evolved so the average size (slightly less than 6 inches) is best.
First an excited vagina is only 4 inches so any cock longer than 4 inches will fill it complete. However, the vagina is designed to accommodate most cocks. That is, a vagina will stretch 150 or 175 percent. It will even stretch up to 200 percent to accommodate the 1% of cocks that are about 8 inches provided the woman is properly excited and the cock is very slowly inserted. However, the 1 in 10,000 larger cocks if fully inserted would result in injury by stretching the vagina past its yield point. Although over a period of several months, the vagina could be stretched further.
Second and primary, if women preferred larger cocks, that would give men with longer than normal cocks a huge evolutionary advantage resulting in larger cocks being the norm. Even a 1% per generation advantage (i.e., men with larger cocks producing 1 percent more children per generation) vr ,0 aeeain (about 20,000 years) would result in a 21,000 (1.01^1,000) to 1 advantage.
Only men are interested in large cocks. Women that have had babies may express a desire for thicker cocks but they appear to have no interest in longer than normal cocks. Which of course make logical sense all normal size cocks will fully fill a vagina.
Loving it
what an engaging storyline. Five stars.
Engaging. ...
Must agree with a readers comment that this story is very engaging !
mechanical
I found the exchange with Joan to be very mechanical. No emotion, no feeling just fact a, fact b, goodbye. At least with analeese she wept a tad.
Second time through...
A fun read. Still five stars. Still love it.
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