I love a good mom/son incest yarn. Hell, you earn 50 points with me for making it a mom/son incest story and for it being exclusively between mom and the son. Where you'd earn the extra 50 points is for making the couple real, passionate, and loving.
You also did good not quoting everyone's statistics and avoiding purple prose- nothing turns me off more than suff like "She had 40DDD breasts and I cock-smacked her with my twelve-inch pussy pleaser", so another 25 points for style.
However, I know we're as much about play as deep relationships here on Lit, but I couldn't help getting a feeling of blase expediency to this story.
Mom's horny, son's available and conveniently into hot older chicks, Tab A goes into Slot B, some sweaty hijinx ensue, the end. Everyone grabs a towel. No real moral conflict, no real tension. Just good wholesome fun at home, right?
I'm a guy, so long buildups and teasing about will they or won't they can get tedious if overdone, but a little more set-up gives the characters resonance and somebody for me to cheer for is all I'm saying.
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Anonymous10/18/09
Love
Mommy and son fuck stories...so MANY women DO have that Mommy thing........
He should turn the situation to where he cuffs her. All good witches on All Saints Day should be submissive. Since she had so much fun with him on the eve of All Saints Day, he should be the one who has the fun the next night.~`` Thanks for the fun read, the story flowed well and was interesting to read.
Very good writing. While the setup was nice, it did not seem to build an emotional connection between the mother and son. That being said it was nice that the bondage was not about humiliation or pain. A lot of authors would of had the mother invite the son's friends in then have sex with them while he was forced to watch. Also the sex scene itself could of been a little longer, it felt like a long build up for a little pay off. However I really enjoyed reading it and I wish I could find more well written mother/son stories like yours. Thanks for writing, now go work on "Mother's Red Shoes 3" ;)
Well-written and erotic! I love hearing Mom describe how she loved arousing her son with her sexy legs, tight skirts and high heels - The details made the story a true pleasure to read.
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Anonymous03/04/12
extremely hot
loved the story and it's setup ... please continue
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Anonymous08/20/12
Very Nice
I have nothing constructive to say and am just letting you know that this is an amazing story, probably one of my favourites on here.
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Anonymous05/27/14
Mother's shoe pet
Oh honey I feel your pleasure too. When I caught my son wanking into one of my sexy stiletto heels I wasnt shocked I was turned on. Taking over I finished jerking my highheel against his young hard cock until he erupted filling my expensive footwear with his cream. Ive never seen a young lad cum so hard ever & it gave me a feeling of incredible power. I placed the cum dripping heel over his face & made him lick up all his goey mess. He has since become my personal foot & stiletto pet. He paints my toes, massages my feet with his lips & tounge & accompanies me on shoe shopping trips. I know it's wrong but he makes me feel so very special. I can get him to do whatever I want.
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Anonymous09/28/15
PLEASE CONTINUE
Your stories are fantastic. You are the best in giving the spicy details of a scene, describing bodies, clothes, shoes, stockings etc..Your momdom-fetish stories are awesome, since you give us the psychological aspect of the incestuous relationship and the play of the ages and the roles, those of mother and son. I hope you continue writting and especially finish your best story, in my opinion, which is "Mother's Therapy". You, jvalet45 and recently Goodboi are the most gifted authors here as far as the incest and fetish category is concerned! Thanks!
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Short and Sweet or Just Lazy?
I love a good mom/son incest yarn. Hell, you earn 50 points with me for making it a mom/son incest story and for it being exclusively between mom and the son. Where you'd earn the extra 50 points is for making the couple real, passionate, and loving.
You also did good not quoting everyone's statistics and avoiding purple prose- nothing turns me off more than suff like "She had 40DDD breasts and I cock-smacked her with my twelve-inch pussy pleaser", so another 25 points for style.
However, I know we're as much about play as deep relationships here on Lit, but I couldn't help getting a feeling of blase expediency to this story.
Mom's horny, son's available and conveniently into hot older chicks, Tab A goes into Slot B, some sweaty hijinx ensue, the end. Everyone grabs a towel. No real moral conflict, no real tension. Just good wholesome fun at home, right?
I'm a guy, so long buildups and teasing about will they or won't they can get tedious if overdone, but a little more set-up gives the characters resonance and somebody for me to cheer for is all I'm saying.
Love
Mommy and son fuck stories...so MANY women DO have that Mommy thing........
On All Saints Day,November 1st
He should turn the situation to where he cuffs her. All good witches on All Saints Day should be submissive. Since she had so much fun with him on the eve of All Saints Day, he should be the one who has the fun the next night.~`` Thanks for the fun read, the story flowed well and was interesting to read.
I am with txcoatl1970 on this one
txcoatl1970 said it PERFECTLY!
I liked
Very good writing. While the setup was nice, it did not seem to build an emotional connection between the mother and son. That being said it was nice that the bondage was not about humiliation or pain. A lot of authors would of had the mother invite the son's friends in then have sex with them while he was forced to watch. Also the sex scene itself could of been a little longer, it felt like a long build up for a little pay off. However I really enjoyed reading it and I wish I could find more well written mother/son stories like yours. Thanks for writing, now go work on "Mother's Red Shoes 3" ;)
Good
Good story although not really into incest.
So Sexy!
Well-written and erotic! I love hearing Mom describe how she loved arousing her son with her sexy legs, tight skirts and high heels - The details made the story a true pleasure to read.
extremely hot
loved the story and it's setup ... please continue
Very Nice
I have nothing constructive to say and am just letting you know that this is an amazing story, probably one of my favourites on here.
Mother's shoe pet
Oh honey I feel your pleasure too. When I caught my son wanking into one of my sexy stiletto heels I wasnt shocked I was turned on. Taking over I finished jerking my highheel against his young hard cock until he erupted filling my expensive footwear with his cream. Ive never seen a young lad cum so hard ever & it gave me a feeling of incredible power. I placed the cum dripping heel over his face & made him lick up all his goey mess. He has since become my personal foot & stiletto pet. He paints my toes, massages my feet with his lips & tounge & accompanies me on shoe shopping trips. I know it's wrong but he makes me feel so very special. I can get him to do whatever I want.
PLEASE CONTINUE
Your stories are fantastic. You are the best in giving the spicy details of a scene, describing bodies, clothes, shoes, stockings etc..Your momdom-fetish stories are awesome, since you give us the psychological aspect of the incestuous relationship and the play of the ages and the roles, those of mother and son. I hope you continue writting and especially finish your best story, in my opinion, which is "Mother's Therapy". You, jvalet45 and recently Goodboi are the most gifted authors here as far as the incest and fetish category is concerned! Thanks!
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