All Comments on 'Halo Ch. 09'

by Mygypsy

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TricialenTricialenover 14 years ago
Happy

I was so happy to see your update. I love the story of Ren and Janey...thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hooray!!!

I was soooo happy to see another chapter. It was exciting. I'm glad Brad and Janey talked. I hope she's as open when she talks to Ren. I hope you'll post another one soon. (P.S. I'm glad your grandbaby is doing better. Congratulations!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice but ...

... the ending just seemed a bit abrupt. I'm glad though that Janey has finally broken it off with Adam. Hopefully she and Ren can at last move on with their lives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Another Great Chapter

You are such a great storyteller. I really enjoy reading your stories.

spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
OMG do NONE of them know what true love is ?

So Ren nearly took it further with Tanaya .....pathetic and they all deserve each other .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not Romance

This does not belong here in this category. Everything is messed up. But I see u like writing situation that are similar to 'To Love A Stray'. Which is so irritating, in a bad way.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

i should have liked the phone 'break up conversation ' to have been included

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