All Comments  for

Vacation Twist Ch. 02

bymozartnflcom©
All
Comments (19)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

When you snooze.....

ya loose, maybe you'll get to watch next time?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

umm

That started off great but ended up a bit sad for the husband i think. I wish he has more luck in your next story, maybe he'll get into bodybuilding as well and get something more out of it.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

what'd he expect after she left w/ studly?

just dump her, she will never come back

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

Really Pathic

But if your a wimp cockold little hubbie, what do you expect.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

as long as she doing the fucking its alright

hubby get off the stick and go find another.do to her as she do to you.their women who want a good man.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

CRAP

CUCKY IS BACK IN TOWN--I had a sorry cheating ass wife--A goog Lawyer I scraped her bones. Now she is some dumb slut trying to make ends meet--She had it made with me, money car, etc. But the cheating doomed her.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by digdaddyrich10/24/09

Pathetic little boy, such a wimp!

I'm surprised he didn't cry himself to sleep. What he should have done is; with his feet on her slut ass, roughly push her slut ass out of bed and let her sleep on the floor.The next morning she would be told that she can find somewhere else to live, that he didn't want to associate with cum sucking slut whores. She might look sexy and hot but she's a nasty slut.......She has the taste of being slutty,and she will never be fit to be around his family anymore. Let her live in the gutter, where she belongs.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

proof

Your writing is proof that some people shouldn't learn to read or write.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

She rejected him? Sure didn't see THAT coming.

In case anyone is wondering, yes, that was sarcastic.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

Waste

Of talent and time, did you jack off writing this shit? If you did you were the only one.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

Pure garbage

Not worth reading. The husband needs to have his head read for allowing her to act like a total slut. Divorce the whore.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/24/09

No story is worse than about a woman like this

Who treats a loving husband like shit while she becomes a trashy slut!!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Deckview10/24/09

Just another humiliation story

How awful and sad to write another one of these.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Ducky710/25/09

A continued down hill

spiral with no end in sight. Just flush it and get it over with.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/25/09

Take her out and dump her in the street

Whore and sluts arent loved they are used.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by RockyRat10/25/09

WOW!! HOTT!!

Great story line.

Obviously a lot of men have fantasies about their ladies being shared or taken with another man, but they're reluctant to do so because they envision something exactly like this happening to them. And in real-life it often does. Keep the tale going--I look forward to your next installment. BTW--ignore all the haters who comment here--they do it to everyone, it's like a game to them and I've found that the best authors receive the most negative comments.

Looking forward to the next chapter....

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/07/09

surprise

she was changed and they just kept coming. there is a new woman who finds the past and its contents, just that. it included husband. the marriage has run its course and it will get no better for him, so end the misery.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by katib01/10/10

Nice work

It is nice to find a story in which one of the characters shows some sign of development, or change over time. I anticipate further development in the wife's character. But, you'd better check the meaning of "wreak." You might wreak havoc with a bottle, but if you drank all of it you'd reek.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/22/12

And what is surprising?

She had found out he was not the best in bed, was not the best looking, and a total WACC. Not she hangs out with people (gals and guys) that have to much testosterone, hell she probably has been using some to help build up. No she has been already been planing on moving on but has yet drawn the bank accounts enough. But the sick author likes WACC stories so the hubby will hang in there as a whimpering play toy that everybody will laugh at.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Vacation Twist Ch. 02  or
More submissions by mozartnflcom.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel