All Comments on 'Best Friend's Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This

is very, very good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well....

Best friends? Good luck with that fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT

i don't have anything else to say

FionaVolpeFionaVolpeover 14 years ago
What?

Allison wasted four years with that stupid ass Mark?? Does Karen even know what love is? The only characters I liked were Jason, who knew he was a dog and Allison kinda, even though she was an idiot for playing 2nd best and putting up with Mark's pseudo love for so long. Thanks for the entertainment.

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
I don't know about all that...

Hell! I thought it was a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
that didn't sound

like "the best head in history" although the fuck seemed adequate. Hehe, just pulling your leg.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Anonymous 12/21/17!

Ignore this anonymous's comment. He is just another redneck who voted for Trump! This was an excellent story.

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