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Typical www or bonnietaylor dog shit efforts!
The effort was written half decent as far as prose & grammar. The plot line was boring and stale. Is this author capable of anything with real substance or effort?
Same old dogshit story
WHY do cuckolds exsist?
An interesting view into a unfamiliar kink
This was a well written peek into this baffling (to me anyway) fetish. I think you illustrated the turn ons you get from the degradation and humiliation you feel in letting yourself be selfishly used by a dominant woman. I think maybe a little more trepedation on the narrator's part about letting himself be used so badly would deepen the story and lend it some pathos (but I'm not particularly familiar with this genre so perhaps that goes against the grain of what attracts you to this lifestyle). I especially like your reliance of scent which I think is an underused detail in erotica. That gangbang his girlfriend was thinking of sounds like it might make a good story, if you have one like that let me know.
Well written but the storyline sucks dog shit
The pathetic little boy ought to turn to homosexuality, then he would be with a partner that would be nice to him. I just don't think a man could be so wimpy to let a woman treat him like that. It's just not real, and that's what I mean about the story sucks. If not for being very well written, I would have scored a lot lower.It would probably score better in the fetish genre. Thanks.
Any Story
That starts out with a guy talking about his tiny cock,I just laugh and move on. See ya.
please write more
excellent. please write more often.
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