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Mother of the Swarm

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by Anonymous

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by mBrow10/24/09

Bizarre!

Nicely done, surprising twist!

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by Daniellekitten10/24/09

Interesting and...

gory as hell. Very nicely done. Good luck with the contest!

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by PrincessErin11/07/09

Ewww

Gross and weird and well written.

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by Anonymous06/16/10

Turnabout is fair prey.

Often it's women victimized in these horror tales, so it's a nice change of pace for the male to suffer an unfortunate fate.

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by Blackthorn110/21/13

Bugs....

Bleh.... This story makes my skin crawl.... Good work.

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by Anonymous06/11/14

Brilliant plot twist!

I was expecting a classic vampire story, and was pleasantly surprised by something quite original.

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