i liked how this story went...her fantasy
come to life...how lucky for her.
they could be win-win for each other.
will there be more?
It was a great fantasy become a reality story but I do wish you went alittle longer with it, maybe how he makes his escape. It just feels like it ended too abruptly. And the band aids over her eyes kind of bother me.
Loved it. Will read more of your submissions. Good sexual tension.
Excellent story. Top notch writing with no distracting errors or typos. Great control play. Loved it. Hoping to find more by elli.
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