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by elledee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent piece of reality....

....but it should be in non-erotic, as it is a sort of rape.Y'know?-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
that's a start....

she dislikes his flirting with other women. he thinks its innocent. men just don't get that when they flirt with women,most women think they are interested. he knows what he has to do to keep this woman, and he's begun...it wasn't rape,she could of said STOP...

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Hmmmmmmmm?

We needed a brief history to start.

elleayeareelleayeareabout 8 years ago
Hot, but should be in non con

Especially since men like this usually kill their women

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