All Comments on 'Nan, Mom and Me Ch. 07'

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William smythWilliam smythover 14 years ago
Better and Better

It hardly seems possible that this series can keep on improving, but there it is; Ch. 07 is the best yet. And what a pleasant prospect of more to come as JD comes into the picture.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What a line

"I slid into those wet folds like a duck sliding into water" What a fabulous line - it evokes all that is wonderful about making love (and sometimes fucking". Images of the lubricating moistness that wants and welcomes the penetrating cock; the ease with which the cock enters, just as ducks dip below the surface without ripples; and the wonderful petal like structure of pussy lips that swell, flare, suck in and then wrap around. A true artist Jena.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another great story

I believe you write some of the best stories on this site. This series may just be your best

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great

the quality of your work is brilliant keep it up (.Y.)

larrydownunderlarrydownunderover 11 years ago
Superb

Another great instalment,,, looking forward to reading more

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