All Comments on 'A Funny Story'

Piss poor story

Waste of time, yours and mine.

been in humor and satire then maybe they would have got it was a joke story good one guy

that is supposed to be erotic. No I get it she is just a high priced whore that serves as cover for a gay guy. But the gay guy doesnt want to have to raise a off color bastard from a whores cunt.

Put it where it belongs so we dont waste time reading it.

not funny, sad that they would do anything for the almighty dollar, Ha

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As in retarded and the "fun stuff"??? Boring.

Who let the 11 year old write this site and post it. This has to join to the top 10 worst on literotica.

Hey it is just a nice original twist on a story and quite funny,lol.

....said "he had never cheated on her with a woman".-so why be so prolific a writer when almost all your very diverse stories have either tells or factual shifts in them? Write less,you'll write better-pistolpackinpete

why waste everyones time with this crap, you suck

I mean the story wasn't that funny or that well written but it was fantastic to see how it upset all the pathetic excuses for men who hide behind their misogynistic tough guy facades. For that alone it deserves top marks. Sorry you guys I just realised you probably didn't understand my comments because I used some big words.

My impression is that you could work on your gender dialog more. Maybe females talk with male phrases in the black community, but in this case it didn't work for me when she described herself. As already said, interesting twist. As to misogyny, it reminds me of a comment I think I read in Penthouse long ago. A male wrote in complaining about having to see penises, and especially erect penises in the pictures of women. Wow, what internal fears about himself he must have had.

What a lot of mindless Drivel!

Thankfully it was not a long piece and the waste was minimal.

One of the worst on this here site !!!

Absolute crap and it makes no sense that she would tell us that she would divorce her husband if she found him in bed with another woman when she knows he's gay and therefore they aren't having sex and their marriage is a sham.

I just wasted 3 minutes of my life. Probably the worst story I have ever read on this site.

Lacking imagination and content. A poorly written and thought out story. This author has written many stories of little quality and is possibly one of the least able, one for me to avoid their contributions in future.

She's going to kill him if he fools around with another woman. But fooling around with a guy is okay? And if he's gay and they're in a fake relationship, why is he loading the shotgun? Boy was THIS ever stupid.

You guys that complain are idiots for not seeing it coming when he said "he's never cheated on me with a women." That's why she'd be so mad if he slept with another women not only is she his cover but she's a fag hag lmao.

Ugly, only ugly and really stupid!!

It is funny

That definitely had an unusual twist in the end.

Traci came to mind... Clever, very clever. Signed: BTW

stupid .

Gay or not, I don't think he will want to raise Lex's kids. It would be obvious they weren't his and that would be bad for business.

WT everlovin’ F. Waste of time and bandwidth.

Very unexpected twist. Thank you.

OMG did I really just read that? I must make a note of the author's name so I can avoid another similar experience.

For all those that don't have a sense of humor, just go away. This was delightful, great fun! Why the shotgun? The husband was just messing with Lex and had a great time doing it. I loved the "whateveristan" and other "istans" throughout. Just well done!

Thanks!