by adsfghjkl123
You took a long time setting up the story line and then rushed thru the best part of the story.
A "normal" romance story. But as he fucked her and they were not using birth control, did he knock her up, the first time around?
great read even if it felt a little rushed towards the end, can't wait to see where the story takes us.
...for a marathon and blew up in the sprint. No sense of pace was a real let-down.
Wow this story made me so wet i had to finger myself...make me really want a big dick inside me.