All Comments on 'Bridget'

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PornguinPornguinover 14 years ago
Short and sweet

Short and sweet; I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
too fast

You took a long time setting up the story line and then rushed thru the best part of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Brilliant

Short and sweet and straight to the point nice work

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
First time and Erotic

A "normal" romance story. But as he fucked her and they were not using birth control, did he knock her up, the first time around?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great read...

great read even if it felt a little rushed towards the end, can't wait to see where the story takes us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You set out...

...for a marathon and blew up in the sprint. No sense of pace was a real let-down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Wow this story made me so wet i had to finger myself...make me really want a big dick inside me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great start keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great start! You should continue.

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