Today is the second time I read this one, and it's even better than the first time.
Voted 5 Stars after my first read, and I'd double it if I could.
Easily my favorite story, and I just don't see that changing.
Thanks, and keep writing!
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Anonymous12/18/16
good story
I liked the story very much, well written, though I felt it could have had an epilogue. What happened afterwards?
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Anonymous12/19/16
Awesome
holy shit. this must be the best fuckin' incest story ever written. no the best stry ever written on literotica. bruh. seriously. IMUUUUU HOLY FUCK THAT DESTROYED ME. IM DEAD BRO I CANT ANYMORE. gah. everything about this story is lit as fucccckkkkkkkk
by
Anonymous12/23/16
slow clap, great story!
Wow. This is one well crafted story. 5 stars.
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Anonymous12/23/16
I figured out imu
I figured out what imu meant the first time she wrote it. Very good story!
by
Anonymous12/25/16
Imu
I got that right off the bat. My first gf and i had used the same skin writing thing and i did imu first. And ooddly enough it took her a while before she got it. Not as long as rich but it wasn't on her first try. Also, long time luker, first time commenting on any story on the site, one of the best i've read in a long time!
by
Anonymous12/26/16
A very good story
I throughly enjoyed this story, of a long chase to find her true love. I would like for you to write another book it with the same characters.maybe have them get married and have kids.B
by
Anonymous12/28/16
Just a really great read!
Wonderful, i loved every word of this story.. More please!!
Great story. Too bad you haven't written anything on here for the better part of a decade. This site is poorer for that. This story cries out for a follow-up.
by
Anonymous01/19/17
Impressed by your writings,Sir,must I have the honour to call you that
I cannot deny that I have enjoyed reading the story very much,especially the latter part.The part when she lets go of all her affections she had held for him followed such warmth in me as much that if I were sitting on an iceberg it would have melted right under me.The words with which you described her triumph are certainly the most impressive and unsurpassable in that sense.And upon a thought contrary to several others,I would have actually preferred it had the story been longer.Still, sir, admired your works very much,more on the emotional aspect than the rest of it.You certainly made my day.This is ruchirsaini@yahoo.com signing off.Thank you
by
Anonymous01/19/17
I cannot fall in agreement with you any more than I already do
Sir,it is the highest degree of truth that you need not bother with any thoughts upon a sequel.It is better to leave the while it can sustain its perfection.This is what I've sincerely stated or attempted the same to Sir mentalcase and Sir Jammyjimmy.......
"You either die a hero or write long enough to see yourself become the villain".
All meant in good humour.
Perhaps it may serve my original purpose,as stated, had it not been taken care of previously.
ruchirsaini@yahoo.com
Thank you
by
Anonymous01/19/17
I cannot fall in agreement with you any more than I already do
Sir,it is the highest degree of truth that you need not bother with any thoughts upon a sequel.It is better to leave the while it can sustain its perfection.This is what I've sincerely stated or attempted the same to Sir mentalcase and Sir Jammyjimmy.......
"You either die a hero or write long enough to see yourself become the villain".
All meant in good humour.
Perhaps it may serve my original purpose,as stated, had it not been taken care of previously.
ruchirsaini@yahoo.com
Thank you
by
Anonymous01/30/17
Yes, I figured out the IMU
I cried a little ti see that she had loved him for so long. It was beautiful:0)
by
Anonymous02/04/17
Oh the feels.
If only Hallmark movies were this Hot, or porn left us happy crying. That would be awesome. An Indie film adaptation of this story would do very well IMHO.
by
Anonymous02/12/17
Well... bawoo!
Have to be honest here. Wish I found this seven and a quarter years ago. Both astounded and in awe. If you're not already an author in the "makes books for money" sense then please do something about it because you should be getting paid. If I wasn't broke as heck I would be demanding a way to give you money for what I just read. While some things suchas chip not being real were obvious from the getgo I went completely the wrong way with imu (thinking "i'd marry you" but being dubious as to the age of those kind of thoughts) and the story itself was truely amazing. If it were friendship rather than incest this would be ready for a movie rather than straight pornographic literature. As it stands it is still on the verge of both alienating and enthralling readers. The fact that you added a forewarning just means that people clearly know what they are getting into, and for that alone I commend you. But the story? Unforgettable. In a very good way.
PS - Don't ever make a sequel unless you can't sleep without writing it, because it just doesn't need one.
I cannot believe how amazing that was! I fucking bow down to you. I wish I wouldn't have read that, only so that I could read it a thousand more times! Great work, you need to get that all over every internet page there is, or publish it or some shit. Amazing. I absolutely love it. Very detailed too. Great work.
English
Great story
I loved reading it I hope to read more soon
Whatta Story!
Today is the second time I read this one, and it's even better than the first time.
Voted 5 Stars after my first read, and I'd double it if I could.
Easily my favorite story, and I just don't see that changing.
Thanks, and keep writing!
good story
I liked the story very much, well written, though I felt it could have had an epilogue. What happened afterwards?
Awesome
holy shit. this must be the best fuckin' incest story ever written. no the best stry ever written on literotica. bruh. seriously. IMUUUUU HOLY FUCK THAT DESTROYED ME. IM DEAD BRO I CANT ANYMORE. gah. everything about this story is lit as fucccckkkkkkkk
slow clap, great story!
Wow. This is one well crafted story. 5 stars.
I figured out imu
I figured out what imu meant the first time she wrote it. Very good story!
Imu
I got that right off the bat. My first gf and i had used the same skin writing thing and i did imu first. And ooddly enough it took her a while before she got it. Not as long as rich but it wasn't on her first try. Also, long time luker, first time commenting on any story on the site, one of the best i've read in a long time!
A very good story
I throughly enjoyed this story, of a long chase to find her true love. I would like for you to write another book it with the same characters.maybe have them get married and have kids.B
Just a really great read!
Wonderful, i loved every word of this story.. More please!!
5*
Great story. Too bad you haven't written anything on here for the better part of a decade. This site is poorer for that. This story cries out for a follow-up.
Impressed by your writings,Sir,must I have the honour to call you that
I cannot deny that I have enjoyed reading the story very much,especially the latter part.The part when she lets go of all her affections she had held for him followed such warmth in me as much that if I were sitting on an iceberg it would have melted right under me.The words with which you described her triumph are certainly the most impressive and unsurpassable in that sense.And upon a thought contrary to several others,I would have actually preferred it had the story been longer.Still, sir, admired your works very much,more on the emotional aspect than the rest of it.You certainly made my day.This is ruchirsaini@yahoo.com signing off.Thank you
I cannot fall in agreement with you any more than I already do
Sir,it is the highest degree of truth that you need not bother with any thoughts upon a sequel.It is better to leave the while it can sustain its perfection.This is what I've sincerely stated or attempted the same to Sir mentalcase and Sir Jammyjimmy.......
"You either die a hero or write long enough to see yourself become the villain".
All meant in good humour.
Perhaps it may serve my original purpose,as stated, had it not been taken care of previously.
ruchirsaini@yahoo.com
Thank you
I cannot fall in agreement with you any more than I already do
Sir,it is the highest degree of truth that you need not bother with any thoughts upon a sequel.It is better to leave the while it can sustain its perfection.This is what I've sincerely stated or attempted the same to Sir mentalcase and Sir Jammyjimmy.......
"You either die a hero or write long enough to see yourself become the villain".
All meant in good humour.
Perhaps it may serve my original purpose,as stated, had it not been taken care of previously.
ruchirsaini@yahoo.com
Thank you
Yes, I figured out the IMU
I cried a little ti see that she had loved him for so long. It was beautiful:0)
Oh the feels.
If only Hallmark movies were this Hot, or porn left us happy crying. That would be awesome. An Indie film adaptation of this story would do very well IMHO.
Well... bawoo!
Have to be honest here. Wish I found this seven and a quarter years ago. Both astounded and in awe. If you're not already an author in the "makes books for money" sense then please do something about it because you should be getting paid. If I wasn't broke as heck I would be demanding a way to give you money for what I just read. While some things suchas chip not being real were obvious from the getgo I went completely the wrong way with imu (thinking "i'd marry you" but being dubious as to the age of those kind of thoughts) and the story itself was truely amazing. If it were friendship rather than incest this would be ready for a movie rather than straight pornographic literature. As it stands it is still on the verge of both alienating and enthralling readers. The fact that you added a forewarning just means that people clearly know what they are getting into, and for that alone I commend you. But the story? Unforgettable. In a very good way.
PS - Don't ever make a sequel unless you can't sleep without writing it, because it just doesn't need one.
amazing
Awesome story! One of the best i have ever read.
Omg love.
I cannot believe how amazing that was! I fucking bow down to you. I wish I wouldn't have read that, only so that I could read it a thousand more times! Great work, you need to get that all over every internet page there is, or publish it or some shit. Amazing. I absolutely love it. Very detailed too. Great work.
Third read ...
... and still as good as the first time.
Love this one.
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