An absolute delight from start to finish. Erotic and sweet, and by the end I felt as if I knew these characters. Thank you for this little gem of a story. You rarely disappoint.
Not exactly my usual type of story , but i must say once i started reading it , i could not stop , very erotic without the wam bam thankyou maam if you know what i mean .
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Anonymous11/15/09
Wonderful!
What a beautiful story of two people who gave each other a very needed gift. Ellie now has a beautiful memory and Anthony was given the confidence go live his life.
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Anonymous11/18/09
mighty fine story
absolutely the best story i've ever read on this site, keep up the good writing as it is appreciated, thank you
This story was sweet, funny, romantic, and the narrative flowed perfectly. Regardless of author or genre, it's one of my favorite short stories. EVER! Bravo!
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An absolute delight
An absolute delight from start to finish. Erotic and sweet, and by the end I felt as if I knew these characters. Thank you for this little gem of a story. You rarely disappoint.
Very Good
Not exactly my usual type of story , but i must say once i started reading it , i could not stop , very erotic without the wam bam thankyou maam if you know what i mean .
Wonderful!
What a beautiful story of two people who gave each other a very needed gift. Ellie now has a beautiful memory and Anthony was given the confidence go live his life.
mighty fine story
absolutely the best story i've ever read on this site, keep up the good writing as it is appreciated, thank you
Outstanding!
This story was sweet, funny, romantic, and the narrative flowed perfectly. Regardless of author or genre, it's one of my favorite short stories. EVER! Bravo!
I liked it
Not much more I can say I did like it
Great!
What a captivating story. Very well done.
Tender and Beautiful
What a great piece, even for a geezer who still loves May Dec stories. I've always loved mature women and Ellie is a gem. TY for a great read. Kal
So sweet!
Thank you!
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