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Ellie and the Deli

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/14/09

An absolute delight

An absolute delight from start to finish. Erotic and sweet, and by the end I felt as if I knew these characters. Thank you for this little gem of a story. You rarely disappoint.

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by shagalot11/15/09

Very Good

Not exactly my usual type of story , but i must say once i started reading it , i could not stop , very erotic without the wam bam thankyou maam if you know what i mean .

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by Anonymous11/15/09

Wonderful!

What a beautiful story of two people who gave each other a very needed gift. Ellie now has a beautiful memory and Anthony was given the confidence go live his life.

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by Anonymous11/18/09

mighty fine story

absolutely the best story i've ever read on this site, keep up the good writing as it is appreciated, thank you

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by Makybe_Diva11/21/09

Outstanding!

This story was sweet, funny, romantic, and the narrative flowed perfectly. Regardless of author or genre, it's one of my favorite short stories. EVER! Bravo!

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by Anonymous06/14/10

I liked it

Not much more I can say I did like it

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by Anonymous02/26/11

Great!

What a captivating story. Very well done.

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by kalodin02/02/13

Tender and Beautiful

What a great piece, even for a geezer who still loves May Dec stories. I've always loved mature women and Ellie is a gem. TY for a great read. Kal

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by KingCuddle01/01/17

So sweet!

Thank you!

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