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by digdaddyrich11/01/09

How did she become to be under a trance

Who hypnotized her and how was she hypnotized? That was running through my mind as I were reading the story.It's a good story, but left a lot of questions. There needs to be a follow up chapter to explain how she has come to this situation in her life. Does she live alone, and is she a cold demanding woman? Will she become a sensual woman now? Thanks.

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by Anonymous11/02/09

Sh*t

Don't bother to follow up. Please.

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by Anonymous11/05/09

awesome!

This is fantastic shit! Excellent, I wanted more though! Keep writing!!!!

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