All Comments on 'Focus'

Who hypnotized her and how was she hypnotized? That was running through my mind as I were reading the story.It's a good story, but left a lot of questions. There needs to be a follow up chapter to explain how she has come to this situation in her life. Does she live alone, and is she a cold demanding woman? Will she become a sensual woman now? Thanks.

Don't bother to follow up. Please.

This is fantastic shit! Excellent, I wanted more though! Keep writing!!!!

Frighteningly ambiguous.