All Comments on 'I Just Don't Know . . . Ch. 03'

I hope this is not the end of their story.

You meant "minimalist design elements" rather than minimal design, I think. Still, I got the spare elegance of the hotel room, perfect backdrop for your lush characters. Thx.

The series was exceptionally well written and elegant. You make the reader feel that they are part of the story. Thank you for a well done, emotional, sensual piece.

ive just read the whole of "i just dont know..." with great pleasure - i found the main characters very real it was as i had met them fairly recently - the dialogue was very smooth and fresh (a common failing on literotica is cliched chat)

the story was very erotic again unlike a lot of other tales on this site the sensuality was both stimulating and provoking - i really hope that more chapter are being written at this moment

kind regards

nick

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that statement she made on the first story is starting to become a false statement, can't wait to read the rest to see if I am right