It's Complicated Ch. 08

waiting too long!!

to have a great story as this so shoooooooort!! please make this story longer or ur udates shorter pleeeease :) Don't let Jaylynn give in easily to Cohen, let her become the alpha female, he didn't have to take off from her like that, he's got too much explaining and begging to do, give him another 5 plus years to get her back!! lol

Way to Short

Although this chapter was way to short, I loved it. Keep them coming.

tooooooooo short

we need more answers and please more backbone for jaylyn.

Love it

but too short!

AHHHHHH!!!

Okay, now you need to update ten times quicker because I wanna know!! Way too short for adequate sustenance but I loved it nonetheless. AMAZING! Please, pretty please update fast!?

About Time

Nice to know what became of the 2 and how things turned out.
Now to see if Cohen comes to N.Y. to Visit with Jaylyn.
and how she reacts to seeing him will be interesting.. I agree Longer Chapters would'nt be un-acceptiable.

wow

awesome update. i cant wait for the two to see each other agai. i agree with everyone else wwwaaayyy too short. lol

Awww man.... c'mon!!

this update was like a quick jab to the gut... & I was on the receiving end! I love where the story is heading. Awesomeness!

Seriously??

I feel like i've been waiting forever and then it was soooo short! I don't think i can take this....i'm coming apart at the seams waiting for this story!! It was a good chapter i just wish it was longer! Can't wait for the next chapter!

U Lost Me

I know real life must interrupt this hobby ... and we interrupt ours to check for updates. Too short to keep us waiting this long. Its good. But u lost me as a reader.

Yay!

First of all to the below comment...who cares what you do and dont read?? Second of all I LOVE LOVE LOVE this update. More please!!!

Darn her I wanted to know what it said... selfish