I was recommended to read this by a very good friend and I was not disappointed.
Totally loved this poem. You have a talent with words.
I am a huge fan of 'bad weather' and you captured everything beautifully. I understood everything and felt as if I was there, a fly on the wall watching everything.
Fatality must be tickled pink!
You pulled me in. I felt as if I was there apart of it all. Truly beautiful!
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