by Nox661
A little bit short but still nicely written. However I think you should do a follow up taking place a few months later, where her belly is just starting to show what happened.
When the opportunity presents itself, but awfully dangerous to leave your DNA behind. Will she get the day after pill?
Will he stay long enough for another round with her? It would be best, this time, to cum in her pretty mouth.
This is okay, but you're missing, like, a lot of commas; it makes it hard to read.
Make her give birth to his baby and then have him give her another one.
I don't condone rape but stories of breeding women against their will makes me so hard.
I can't count the number of times I've jacked off to this.
It's one of those classics you can't get enough of.