All Comments on 'Home Invasion'

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portlanddrewportlanddrewover 14 years ago
follow up

A little bit short but still nicely written. However I think you should do a follow up taking place a few months later, where her belly is just starting to show what happened.

Greystreet0523Greystreet0523over 14 years ago
Nothing like taking your pleasure

When the opportunity presents itself, but awfully dangerous to leave your DNA behind. Will she get the day after pill?

Will he stay long enough for another round with her? It would be best, this time, to cum in her pretty mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very Hot

Ohhh my. I wish I was her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Lucky girl

Come to my house and bring a friend or two! Sarah

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Proofread

This is okay, but you're missing, like, a lot of commas; it makes it hard to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Chapter 2

Make her give birth to his baby and then have him give her another one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Primal

I don't condone rape but stories of breeding women against their will makes me so hard.

SeekerOfDesiresSeekerOfDesiresalmost 6 years ago
Classic rape

I can't count the number of times I've jacked off to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
An old story but a good one...

It's one of those classics you can't get enough of.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes!

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