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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/07/09

breathless

Left me breathless with the power of the words. You'll either get it or you won't.

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by Anonymous11/08/09

wow !!

I know i should say more but seriously ... WOW !!

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by Anonymous11/17/09

Very Nice

That blew my mind. It read so smooth and meant so much. I loved the metaphors and the the word play.

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by jsmile222211/18/09

Mind fuck

It touched me in ways I can't explain. The writing style and voice is totally original and made me think a different way. It turned me on to be inside of the author's stream of conciousness and imagining myself in a similar situation! Super hot!

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