All Comments on 'Brown Eyes, Blue Smile Ch. 02'

the relationship seems real, as if u've lived it urself? lol, anyways i keep an eye out all the time. btw i hit 4stars by accident, my bad. but rated the story all the way, cheerz big earz lol

00-Same old dogshit from you.

I hope that's not true. You have the makings of a very tender, romantic story here. Please don't be dissuaded. It's easy for people to be cruel when they cower behind anonymity.

I won't read any more anyway.

Please don't last this be the last post! Please keep writing, I would love to read more! :)

I think the story line is pretty good and I would like to see it go somewhere. I've noticed a lot of negative comments from your writing but I have to say that some of the stories that get the most hate are the ones I like most.

oh and the one that said same old dog shit, no one is making them read your stuff I bet its funny as hell to know they are reading it even though they don't like your other stuff

the idiots who have someone read to them last post, but do not understand what to be contrinued means.

I really like the story but the bad grammar and syntax and missing words is annoying so I couldn't give you a 100 rating. The story line is interesting but the character development needs work. Keep working on the story. I love interracial stories where the heroine is black and the hero can be any ethnicity. Funny how people can publicly criticize what they don't understand but secretly indulge in. The person making those comments really wants to be able to express their interest in being with someone of a different ethnic background but is scared shitless they won't be viewed same way by people they are close to.

You would be doing the site a favour.

Love your story ... pls continue writing pls ..