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by Anonymous

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by SweetOblivion11/07/09

Clever parallels

Not sure if you needed the final paradox though - love is sometimes paradox enough in itself. Sweet O.

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by Bill Dada11/11/09

^

I enjoyed this but do agree with Sweet O that the last four lines aren't as good as the rest of the poem. I love the image of his smile dangling from the rear view mirror.

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