by seannelson
This is really good. I have a sense of motion right from the start. There's a certain cadence like wheels rolling down the highway. I like the contrast in images also: wanderlust/loneliness, work/play (in a Nevada brothel manner of speaking). Finally, I thought I saw a skillful use of repetition, not only direct but indirect (vaquero/cowboy) that added to the wonderful rhythm of the poem. Well done!
Very touching and great imagery. This is probably the best work of yours I have read so far. Good Stuff.