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An Ode to Truck Drivers

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by greenmountaineer11/08/09

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This is really good. I have a sense of motion right from the start. There's a certain cadence like wheels rolling down the highway. I like the contrast in images also: wanderlust/loneliness, work/play (in a Nevada brothel manner of speaking). Finally, I thought I saw a skillful use of repetition, not only direct but indirect (vaquero/cowboy) that added to the wonderful rhythm of the poem. Well done!

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by vrosej1011/10/09

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Very touching and great imagery. This is probably the best work of yours I have read so far. Good Stuff.

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