You might consider telling if everything does come about they move their team ,Buy Mansion,Continue and have anymore kids.
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Anonymous01/13/13
Couldn't follow it
Should have read the earlier parts to know who was whom. But other than that, to me you don't show, you just tell. Where's the hot dialogue? Where are the screaming slaves and would-be slaves? Where are the descriptions of how it felt to a cunt, to a cock? There's nothing really HOT about this contribution. My cunt didn't release one single drop while I read it. You might get some wild girl with a hot cunt or guy with a prick that can get hard three minutes after coming to advise you. I don't know who these people are, but they don't seem to be into sex.
Suzzie in Laguna Beach
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Anonymous05/08/16
What Cupcake really did?
Was go to the hospital after a whipping. They documented her wounds and he was arrested. He went to prison for years and years and she took over for him, thereby winning all phases of their bets, keeping all the money and ridding herself of the pain in her ass. Epically stupid story.
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Good Story
You might consider telling if everything does come about they move their team ,Buy Mansion,Continue and have anymore kids.
Couldn't follow it
Should have read the earlier parts to know who was whom. But other than that, to me you don't show, you just tell. Where's the hot dialogue? Where are the screaming slaves and would-be slaves? Where are the descriptions of how it felt to a cunt, to a cock? There's nothing really HOT about this contribution. My cunt didn't release one single drop while I read it. You might get some wild girl with a hot cunt or guy with a prick that can get hard three minutes after coming to advise you. I don't know who these people are, but they don't seem to be into sex.
Suzzie in Laguna Beach
What Cupcake really did?
Was go to the hospital after a whipping. They documented her wounds and he was arrested. He went to prison for years and years and she took over for him, thereby winning all phases of their bets, keeping all the money and ridding herself of the pain in her ass. Epically stupid story.
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