All Comments on 'Melting The Ice Princess'

I felt this was a well written, pleasurable story. You were able to explore the sheer delight an exhibitionist feels in a 'display' situation. Not everyone knows that feeling!

I had the thought that more would have happened at the party and I was expecting more salacious, uninhibited sex.

I enjoyed the story and hope we will explore things a bit further in your future writing.

First of all, please review your grammar.

Seems not credible at all.

Michael Patrick has an easy to read style and a descriptive vocabulary that lets the reader get a real sense of the characters. The sexual foibles of the Ice Princess are plausible and pleasurably erotic. My wife and I both felt there is a factual core behind this very entertaining story.

I like this story, because my wife loves to showoff - mostly in an "accidently" way.

One of the better written stories on this site. Believable and well told

A well written story.

I love reading about sexually uptight women being exposed and finding themselves aroused by the humiliating experience. My own wife is very conservative but one summer night we were making love with the window open. In the aftermath of her orgasm she caught a glimpse of someone watching and listening at the window. Tears of humiliation streamed down her cheeks but she was at the same time consumed by sexual excitement. It took a moment for me to realise what was happening. When I finally did I added to her shame by whispering an obscene commentary of what he had seen and could still see. Her orgasms had never been stronger than they were that night. Reminding her of her performance after she knew someone was watching is still the fastest way into her panties to this day.

time for a sequal or new submission Michael

I am primarily a Loving Wives devotee --- but a very well-written and interesting story. 5* from me.

Cheers, Amy