The Benefits Man

Piss Poor Story

I guess you take the good with the bad. This was bad, bobbie.

This one really needs a second chapter

Was she mine Benny would be looking for his teeth & the rest of them could just keep Ellen cause she sure would not be coming home with me.

more?

The story is good, just not complete....a real cliff hanger i hope you or some one else would finish it.

Thank you

was there a plot somewhere?

if so I didnt see one.

Typical JPB crap

Stupid idea, not much of a plot and zero ending.

Low IQ

After reading the first line, I know what you are going to write in the last line. You are such a poor writer. Same plot over and over again, with change of name for husband and wife. You have so low IQ.
Try to write something new, so that I can not predict the ending.
What you are doing is just changing the names and few other things in the format which you have saved in your computer. Which is very common in this era of IT.

not one of your best

undecided, but certainly not one of your best JPB. Hence 50. As an offset to more, it would pass. Seems indeed the story could use another chapter

Excellent!

We could use another chapter on this one.

Same old cuck nonsense from JPB.

Wait till you see his other new story from a certain website. I am guessing he will post it here soon. It's even worse than this one.

Love the idiots

Love the idiots that complain about bob. Nobody else on here is writing for shit and you are complaining about someone that actually can put a story together? Give it a rest or else we are stuck with gaywads that are just writing about suck fantasies for themselves.

Course, then again, if you are complaining then maybe you like the gay fantasies....

Love The Idiot Anony in USA

You complain about people not liking Bob's stories, to bad. If you like them talk to them not to readers that dont care for your low rated opinions. This story is about as low in life as one couple can go. The husband must have an IQ of about 40 and also be as dense and as stupid as he can be. The wife is a whore and puts out for her companies workers whenever and whereever she can. By now she would have acquired a large variety of diseases in real life but then in Bob's world nothing every happens to the queen slut and the husband is left with the creamed panties and a family falling apart. How many women ruined your life Bob? So many you want to get back a men for what your women did to you?

Begs for a sequel.

This should have been your invitational this year. If it was, I would have rated it 100. Booklinz

I sympathise with you Bob

Great little story and very amusing! Can you really believe that nobody else thought it was funny. Does 'annonymous in wherever' actually mean over serious with no sense of humour? Bet your life it means incapable of writing a story themselves. (with aplogies to some of you of course)

For "Begs for a Sequel:

There will be no sequel, just as there is no ending.
JPB cannot write an ending, and surely will not write a sequel.

Sorry Brittese

I didn't find this funny and when I write stories they are about people and things I like, there was nothing and no one in this I liked. Sluts and dumb ass hubbies don't turn me on. Bob is a twisted old man, some I like, some I don't, he doesn't care either way.

Well Written

It was not enjoyable because the poor guy had his world come apart. Perhaps he should have gotten suspicious when there were too many guys dancing with her. But like many man he was lazy and sat there drinking instead of holding his territory. But then again, I would prefer to have my suspicions confirmed, because you do not want to run off half
cocked and it was certainly better to get rid of the whore... But there is always the threat of the protagonist preferring to sit in the closet and ... Those stories of JPB realllly burn me... This one was interesting and with a disagreeable flavor..

Skilled writer-stupid plots

I think you write well but when you make husband total brain dead idiot it's hard to enjoy the story.
the Ct. Yankee

yeah

and then id break his fucking nose and tell him sorry but now you can have the sorry bitch to take home with you...i heard what some of tjhe other guys said in the bathroom and if my dear wife didnt get fucked i want her to prove it right now by showing us all her cunt....if its not wet and covered in cum then ill take back your broken nose....but if it is well just take it out of the 500000 thousand im sueing this company for .....and you can pay for the divorce also....oh and wonder what all your wives will say when they finmd out all the men here have been fucking the compant slut...yeah ill agree a skilled writer yes but one thatknows his subjects no ....jpb is really pretty stupid when it comes to knowing what his audience wants to read

Life doesn't have endings unless you die

JPB has the sophistication to know when to quit telling a story and leave it to the readers to do what they will with it in their own mind. Unfortunately, he attracts many readers without the same sophistication. Another fun read from JPB. Always makes logging in worthwhile.

the only thing

I don't get why in hell wanted his wife have him go to the party? just curious. this was about the dumbest idea or did she think looking makes it easier for him then telling him?

Benefits Man needs wife's angle and details

I like your story but really would have liked more details about the wife and her affairs. A follow up story would be great. I want to see if the husband can get anymore stupidand if she can get anymore sluttier.

male Humiliation is bobie's bag

In every flavor its always the same - a helpless cuck just doesn't get it - or wants to watch.

bobie's needle just gets stuck on self sought male humiliation cuz nothing else can get him up.

Wasted talent in his long deep addiktion.

How sad little weakling.

Ha ha...

....the guys only want to dance with the homely cum dump.This is a decent start to a story so...(but harry can't find a plot?)-pistolpackinpete

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Fuck the plot

Same old assholes with same old complaints.

Well writen, but...

...finish that damn thing!!!
More details about the husbandhe´s so clueless...) and the wife.

The Last laugh

This is HighIQ110 and yes from India.
I am a Post Graduate at Mathematics and MBA. An executive in corporate sector.
The story I have written, New Years Eve Party, is not my story. It has written by JPB in the name “The Benefits Man”.
I have just changed the names and reposted it. I have no intention to steal his or anyone’s story.
And I have no intention to write a single story here or any other website.
Then why I have done this? Because I want to show the world two things.
1. This is just what JPB is doing. He has saved a format in his computer and posting a new story changing the names and few things with the same plot.
2. Everyone is not block-headed fool like him.
I got 14 very interesting comments and total 125 nos…lol.
One of them told me that it is better than JPB.
I am really sorry for that JPB.
Who gets the last laugh ???

I wished the hell you would give your male charicters some balls and intelegence. I am sick to death of these demasculating type wives who believe they are invinsable in their cheating!!!!

Damn Bob

Wish you'd stop this shit.

Yes, I know - you write for your own fun but - some of us enjoy your humor but not the hanging parts.

Thanks...enjoyed it anyway!

Jeez Bob

You write about a man that is supposed to be smart, but then portray him as being so stupid that it is a wonder that he can feed himself. In the next story his wife will give birth to a half black baby and convince the hubby that it must have come from his genes, even though she has been witholding sex and he has a vasectomy.

1 star rating

1 star rating because its the lowest that is allowed. An incomplete story no matter how well it is written, simply cannot deserve more. Not just that, but i strongly believe an incomplete story should not be allowed on the site. JPB, Brittease are authors who love writing such stories. It's a trend that should not be encouraged.

I HATE unfinished stories

And this story fits securely into that "unfinished" category.

Stupid

I really like your writing when you finiush the story, but this one just SUCKS because you didn't!

great story

Well done