OOH, this has been the most criticized of all of my stories on Lit... Sorry for my human mistake, Henry/George... and to the hater, i am really sorry but opinions are like assholes. everyone has one. thanks to those who commented for the better! and Merry Christmas!
Absolutely loved it. Well written and HIGHLY erotic. My only complaint is that it was too short.Oh, and I'M a man. Watch the generalizations. Prejudice is ugly from any direction.
Sorry, but I thought you jumped too quickly into the sex and didn't give enough build-up, to establish the story. Thanks for sharing it with us and keep on trying. ;)
Especially in light of you being a man writing as a woman in the story. I agree wholeheartedly with Klaxx's comment. You be a good boy now if you want Ms. Santa to give your big black dick something for Xmas!
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Good Story
Ignore the basher. I'm sure it was a man. It was well written.
Okay
It was okay, but I thought they got into it a little too fast. By the way, the central chartacter of "It's a Wonderful Life" is named George Bailey.
to the readers...
OOH, this has been the most criticized of all of my stories on Lit... Sorry for my human mistake, Henry/George... and to the hater, i am really sorry but opinions are like assholes. everyone has one. thanks to those who commented for the better! and Merry Christmas!
Excellent!
Absolutely loved it. Well written and HIGHLY erotic. My only complaint is that it was too short.Oh, and I'M a man. Watch the generalizations. Prejudice is ugly from any direction.
Not one of your best....
Sorry, but I thought you jumped too quickly into the sex and didn't give enough build-up, to establish the story. Thanks for sharing it with us and keep on trying. ;)
Oh, that was cute!
Especially in light of you being a man writing as a woman in the story. I agree wholeheartedly with Klaxx's comment. You be a good boy now if you want Ms. Santa to give your big black dick something for Xmas!
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