For being the author's first story, (two chapters) was a big undertaking for even a seasoned author. I think that the more you write the better you will become. Thanks for the good story.......Rich
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Anonymous11/11/09
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Anonymous11/11/09
yes it is wonderfull
yes we are asking for it. go a head.
you can write good. dont care about negative comments.
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Anonymous11/11/09
prison
what prison are you in.
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Anonymous11/11/09
Nope
Nope Nope Nope.
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Anonymous11/16/09
Marvellous and exotic
What a nice fellow!! Sarath is marvellous..
I am sure that Sarath will satisfy all her requirements in future.
What about Ritesh? will he get another chance to fuck his wife?
there seems to be some spelling mistakes, but it is not important as the story doesn't draw the attention of readers in to spellings and grammer since it is so thrilling, believe me I did MB 6 times after reading this story.
English
BAD STORY
bad bad spelling, (read not red) Spell check does not work well for stupid people...
A few glitches, but a good story overall
For being the author's first story, (two chapters) was a big undertaking for even a seasoned author. I think that the more you write the better you will become. Thanks for the good story.......Rich
00
00
yes it is wonderfull
yes we are asking for it. go a head.
you can write good. dont care about negative comments.
prison
what prison are you in.
Nope
Nope Nope Nope.
Marvellous and exotic
What a nice fellow!! Sarath is marvellous..
I am sure that Sarath will satisfy all her requirements in future.
What about Ritesh? will he get another chance to fuck his wife?
there seems to be some spelling mistakes, but it is not important as the story doesn't draw the attention of readers in to spellings and grammer since it is so thrilling, believe me I did MB 6 times after reading this story.
Congrats
Yekollu
Superb .........!!!
Plz write more.......
Awesome ...!!
Keep It Up ....
best story
very well written
please post more about these two couple
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