Rob's Saga Ch. 03

Wow Bloody!

Does anyone have a solution other than to make Kari and Audrey sisters? Are there any nice women in this universe?
Why 03? Other than that, smooth...

Good ending

Well done. What is interesting is that in the beginning of this ending Rob's Police friend is reviewing some of Rob's earliy decisions made in the JPB original. And several times the Police / detective says to Ron are you a fucking idiot?

No Rob is NOT an idiot but JB might be

Well done! Thanks!

Enjoyed the author's perspective on how it should end.

Excellent read

You improved on the original.

VERY, VERY

GOOD ! ! !

I liked it.

I liked your ending far better that JPB's. It took on a whole new meaning. I'm getting where I really hate stories about wimpy-assed, cuckolded husbands. I'm actually getting to where I'm starting to understand how Harry in Virginia feels. Scary, huh? Thanks for the story.

Good Ending

Liked the way you ended the Saga of Rob and ladies.
at least it was Exciting!

Way better than jpb crap

She's down about and he's not a wimp. Jpb must be getting ready to roll over on his grave when finally drops.

BETTER THAN JPB ENDING ABOUT TIME SOMEONE WROTE REVENGE .THAT CUCKOLD SHIT IS 4 GAY WIMPS

A pretty abrupt continuation, it doesn't make all that much sense, but fits the author's name, so not a surprise.
A shame, when I saw it was an alternate continuation of JPB's story I was hoping that he would end up with one of, or perhaps both of the twins, but that's just me being a pervert I guess :-), at the very least he didn't end up with Audrey, that ending really bugged me in JBL's version.

Better

Better than the wimpy JPB ending but this chapter didn't really follow the previous story. It seemed to jump from 4 people getting along with him to 4 people trying to kill him in his front yard. This ending might have worked if the story would have taken a little longer and developed the story line but this was too abrupt. Gave JPB's story 1* because of the pussy ending. Gave this one 2* because the bitches got what they deserved, but come on; 4 loving people to 4 trained killers in 2 paragraphs. Just too fast.