Greece Ch. 04

hmm

i'm rooting for andrew to get the girl :P but i'm psyched ur still posting looking forward to see how this all plays out

waited forever

Yay.....i have been waiting forever to read the next part to this series and i love it, cant wait to read more and hopefully we dont have to wait long

Please..

Don't make us wait as long for the next chapter I love this story. I wish Basil would get his act togther but I like Andrew too.

WOW!! AMAZING!!

Okay, i would've just left a comment for the first chapter, but i figured "a comment for each chapter says alot, but a long comment will suffice also".lol for this being asmall little whatever story[as you may think and said before you begain in the first chapter], it's very good.your characters dialogue show who they are and get straight to the point.love that. also, it keeps us guessing between the two guys; "who will she pick? Basil, or Andrew?!".that's good too. they're both equally interested in each other in this triangle of love. also, leo is such a witty character and adds more to this story [strong roll for a little person.interesting choice!!and it works]. btw, where can i find one of her? lol jk.this story is very well developed.enough info for you to progress with in the story as it unravels, and the style that you choose, to rotate it around her and her emotions and thoughts; beautiful.you truely feel like you're in the story, like your her friend and she's telling youwhat happend w/o telling you directly [if that makes any sense].bottom line, i love it!! i read alot of stories here purely to read something interesting and i've got to say, for a simple story, its an attention grabber and i hope to read more soon and that the story keeps going and doesn't cut off half way or doesn't have enough chapters.lol can't wait for chapter5!! please don't keep us waiting too long :]

mistake...

So i just noticed a small error... i accidentally called Andrew --->Alex at the end of the story. Sorry, my bad, my blunder lol. wont happen again

Really want to see where this goes

I really enjoyed this story and the others that you posted, Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see where you go with these characters. Can't wait for the next installment.

Uhhh forget basil focus on the chunk of Greek meat in front of you honey