All Comments on 'Tumbling off the Cliff Ch. 10'

You have written another great chapter in the series. I like how you develop the characters of Mitch and Lisa. I like how she has been able to keep him off track with her actions at times. I also like how she has been able to keep him in line with her at times. I like how you've got him starting to follow love with her. Can hardly wait to see what you do with him when she tells him that she is pregnant.