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My Older Sister and I

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by Anonymous

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by digdaddyrich11/12/09

The story is a little choppy didn't flow smoothly

Other than that It is a good storyline and erotic. Thanks for the post.

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by Anonymous11/12/09

Very good.

Very good first story. I enjoyed reading it, please continue to write more stories like this one only longer.

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by oldwayne01/25/10

I can't lie about it.

Drinking urine and licking excrement turned me all the way off! I would have been fine without all of that nasty shit.

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by Anonymous04/13/10

elder sister

it's truly the best story,albeit short,that i have read in many years.incest with elder sister ,particularly if she is elder by at least ten years is the best thing to happen to a pervert.i wish he could continue with more scenes and episodes particularly sniffing and licking her incestous anus.

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by Anonymous11/05/10

first draft

this was nothing but a first draft and never should have been posted. read all comments and listen to the readers then do a rewrite and use a good editor

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by Anonymous03/20/11

sisterlove

Very good story love and sex history.however u will not able to get married officially.u can go on holidays in an hotel of Tahiti islands and get urself married by an exotic chief,according to their customs.i have experienced it with my elder sister Jennifer.It was and is still wonderful.Incest can be beautiful if there is love and consent betwen the two.

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by Anonymous05/06/13

Gross!

There is a strange human fascination with reading these kinds of stories, and frankly I find it sick.

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