All Comments on 'Chloe and Me'

by 1TallWhiteBoy

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oneofthegirlsoneofthegirlsover 14 years ago
Nice 1st submission

Although your description of Chloe is not my normal interest, I liked your writing, and enjoyed Sean's "attitude" throughout. I look forward to more.

NakedinNCNakedinNCover 14 years ago
Excellent start!

Excellent start! Based on your bio you are sharing your fantasy mate with us. Keep imagining and keep writing! Good descriptive phrases, felt like I was watching a movie.

eyeball1eyeball1over 14 years ago
Need more!

Need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
next chapter please!

Oh Chloe is like my dream girl. Give me more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hot Start

A really hot start with loads of potential to develop.

Can't wait for the next episode, when he gets to park the pork.

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