by maria_hiddinks
Very, very hot as a sexual fantasy although a bit unrealistic as a story (the 26 y.o. son sleeping in the same bed with his parents is hard to believe). I would prefer it if you had created a more plausible setting but I enjoyed it anyway. I like your style so I hope you keep on writing these stories.
She needs to get pregnant while her husband is on an extended trip, where she couldn't bribe the doctor into saying that it was her husband's child. Her husband would finally know that she is pregnant by another man and it turns him on. Having her cheat on him makes him appreciate her more as a sexual woman. He admits that he thought that she was fucking someone else, because her pussy is a lot looser now than it use to be. Thanks for the good fantasy.
When I read stories here, my goal is to whack off. It is not to attempt to figure out what someone who speaks and writes poorly in English is trying to communicate (badly). Some things just don't translate. Oh no! My hardon has left the building. Thanks a lot.
The mother is a filthy, cheap indian slut, the father a fool and the son is a lousy motherfucker. Hated the story !
Marie, thank you for your story. I appreciate your attention to detail. Furthermore, I can't imagine the difficult challenge of submitting a story in a language of another culture. Nevertheless, you have done quite well. Regarding some of the previous comments, try to understand that the readership is primarily male and that many of them appear to be illiterate or nearly so. And those that are able to sound words out, primarily read the stories on Literotica to stroke off. Another thing you should consider is that many readers obviously have not been outside their state boundaries, let alone out of the U.S., consequently they have little knowledge of other peoples or their cultures. Notice too that most lack the courage to attach their name. Let me offer a suggestion for future stories. In the future create your male character with a large penis, fourteen to sixteen inches is fine. You see all American men have cocks about this size. Also, your female characters should be chaste, even virginal, but once they see the magnificent manhood that is being offered them, they should submit and even beg to be fucked. This too is in keeping with the way American women. And don't forget, the men in America can fuck for hours. Maria, if you can employ these techniques you are well on your well to earning your first red H. Gayle
story is too fast and short. it would be better if explain more passionately. you need to shown more love, lust, attraction and nudity between mother son. when the son gift lingerie to his mom than why not a swimsuit or bra panty? and what she done with that you cant define. the story plot was ok, many of horny teenage boy have fantasize that how would be look like their saree wearing innocent mom completely naked. because mother is the most nearest and close women when they got pubarity. some of i know they got some naked photos their mother when mom in shower.
Wow your love with Arun sounds awesome and real. And Congrats on your daughter:)
The characterization of the two protagonists is excellent. The sex-craving mother who can only be satisfied by her big good-looking and very virile son. And especially of her boy, Arun, who knows exactly what he wants and just goes ahead and gets it. What Arun wants is that beautiful hairy hole between his mother's legs, the same hole he came out of. The first time he shoves his big fat penis up that hole and blows his hot young balls inside her, "Arun's face was glowing with pride, the pride that comes with a conquest, the pride of conquering his mother's vagina." And not only has he done what countless other boys can only whack off dreaming of doing--fucked his own mother--but he's fucked a baby up where he was once a baby. But that was the horny rascal's plan all along. "Arun was very happy that he is the father. He said he always wanted to knock his mother up." A boy's potent semen flooding his own mother's cunt--exactly where it belongs.
same story ....and copy ........from literotica itself!!!