All Comments on 'Insert Another Coin'

I NEVER read bdsm, but, this one is so wow!!!! I do think your writing is exceptional (except!!! a batter doesn't test his bat at the mound[at the mound would work in erotica, not baseball], the batter tests it in the batter's box [never before noticed the implication here] or the on deck circle).

I do hope you will continue writing....but maybe you would try other than bdsm....