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Never Again Ch. 03 Pt. 01

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by SSSKan195502/27/10

Great Story

This is a great story please continue.

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by Anonymous09/29/12

Don't kerave us hanging

Finished the story - are the kids brother and sister? Story is incomplete....

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by Anonymous11/22/14

editing

the switch between perspectives was really confusing, made the story less enjoyable. maybe use a line of asterisks or something between perspectives next time?

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