Different and well written, don't see a happy ever after for him and Allison but look foward to the rest, thanks.
Lots of details that speak to a lack of morality on the part of the protagonist. But it is a rich tapestry worth paying attention to. I keep wondering about the 30 chapter version!
15 YEARS of wimpiness...
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Different and well written, don't see a happy ever after for him and Allison but look foward to the rest, thanks.
Yep, I will still be here at the end!
Lots of details that speak to a lack of morality on the part of the protagonist. But it is a rich tapestry worth paying attention to. I keep wondering about the 30 chapter version!
idiocy...
15 YEARS of wimpiness...
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