Although it was very nicely written, this should be categorized under Erotic Horror. It was clearly erotic. The fact that the protagonist and antagonist were both female created the illusion that the story belonged to the Lesbian Sex genre. At first the eroticism was in the mystique of Adrian and the curious arousal that the reader viewed from Kyle's perspective. As we got to the scene in the lounge, there was still eroticism. It took on the edge of horror as the possibility of death arose in the reader's mind and the perspective shifted more to Adrian's. That edge was never withdrawn, and the death of the protagonist crossed over the line, clearly placing the story in the Erotic Horror genre. It was a pretty good story for that genre. You should write more.
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hot but why
why oh why did kyle have to die lol. i know its a vampire story but man that was wrong lol. liked it other then kyle dying.
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Although it was very nicely written, this should be categorized under Erotic Horror. It was clearly erotic. The fact that the protagonist and antagonist were both female created the illusion that the story belonged to the Lesbian Sex genre. At first the eroticism was in the mystique of Adrian and the curious arousal that the reader viewed from Kyle's perspective. As we got to the scene in the lounge, there was still eroticism. It took on the edge of horror as the possibility of death arose in the reader's mind and the perspective shifted more to Adrian's. That edge was never withdrawn, and the death of the protagonist crossed over the line, clearly placing the story in the Erotic Horror genre. It was a pretty good story for that genre. You should write more.
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