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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/15/09

WOW!!!

This is one of the best's story on this site!
I'm waiting for part III!

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by thebug3707/05/15

Making us wait

Stopping the act of taking the teenage girl as you describe the action. I enjoyed the first chapter but dropping the taking of the girl's cherry at the end and working it into another chapter felt like you wanted us to be your slave or we would beg you write another chapter. Sorry, you started with the seduction as both wanted, then took your fingers off the keyboard.

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