How convenient. It takes his wife dying for him to realize he loves her? Maybe he should have told Kate to hold off for a few months until after his wife is dead, that way he really doesn't lose too much, does he? Typical, new pussy, new love.
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Anonymous11/14/09
Great Start!
Can't wait for the ending.
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Anonymous11/14/09
No Thanks
Didn't like it.
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Anonymous11/14/09
Sorry in most cases that close with brain cancer
there are simply to many things going on. The other woman has her answer in a few months she will be living with him. Knowing someone is going to die makes you concentrate on that individual, doesnt mean you love them any more or any less. I find it interesting the fall in bed and there is no discussion of treatments, there are options, of meds, there are options, and being basically medicated into lala land to stop the pain. Does it sound like I have been there?
I reread and am replying. You state they had grown kids, a young Kate, she has an incurable disease, they have mind blowing sex, and they are one. It seems as maybe there are no answerable questions. Did she know about Kate, does she really have the disease, do the kids know. I want to change my vote to 3 stars after rereading. I am not critic, I just read and grade, No story deserves a 1 and very few rate a 5. In preference to the topics in lit most do fall in the 3-4 range. No disrespect intended, TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous07/01/12
You are correct TAZZ
These stories don't deserve a 1. But since there is no zero I will continue to vote 1*, even if it isn't deserved.
English
Not bad....
....hard to believe so many people can't rekindle love simply by imagining this type of thing-pistolpackinpete
Really?
How convenient. It takes his wife dying for him to realize he loves her? Maybe he should have told Kate to hold off for a few months until after his wife is dead, that way he really doesn't lose too much, does he? Typical, new pussy, new love.
Great Start!
Can't wait for the ending.
No Thanks
Didn't like it.
Sorry in most cases that close with brain cancer
there are simply to many things going on. The other woman has her answer in a few months she will be living with him. Knowing someone is going to die makes you concentrate on that individual, doesnt mean you love them any more or any less. I find it interesting the fall in bed and there is no discussion of treatments, there are options, of meds, there are options, and being basically medicated into lala land to stop the pain. Does it sound like I have been there?
N0.
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beautiful but sad story
Well done story, and such a sad ending. Pain and sorrow is all they have to look forward to.Thanks
Rubbish
At least be consistent with names and the English language.
The story has enormous potential but is ruined by brevity and your style.
NON SEQUITUR
especially at the end.....That was the end, wasnt it? TK U MLJ LV NV
RE READ AND ANSWER FOR DSOUL
I reread and am replying. You state they had grown kids, a young Kate, she has an incurable disease, they have mind blowing sex, and they are one. It seems as maybe there are no answerable questions. Did she know about Kate, does she really have the disease, do the kids know. I want to change my vote to 3 stars after rereading. I am not critic, I just read and grade, No story deserves a 1 and very few rate a 5. In preference to the topics in lit most do fall in the 3-4 range. No disrespect intended, TK U MLJ LV NV
You are correct TAZZ
These stories don't deserve a 1. But since there is no zero I will continue to vote 1*, even if it isn't deserved.
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