All Comments on 'A Sexy Christmas Day'

by MsGinger77

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
Michelel72Michelel72over 14 years ago
Very hot

This story is very good, I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Watch the homophones

even though this story has been told countless times, it wasn't that bad. However you need to watch homophones. You know two words that sound the same but are spelled differently. At one point you wrote:

"Not a sole was traveling the road." This would make it the bottom of a shoe. I did understand that you meant one person but the proper word in this case is soul.

MsGinger77MsGinger77over 14 years agoAuthor
To Watch the homophones

Thank you for pointing out my mistake, I will becareful from now on.

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Follow-Up

We have to see how New Years goes for the 2 of them. If he's as Rich as it sounds and has Checked her out . He would know she wants to run a Buisness. So maybe sex and Buisness will Mix?

Old_BlueOld_Blueover 14 years ago
A Most Enjoyable Read.

Nicely done. It may be a story that has been told countless times, but it’s always nice to see it with new twists. Merry Christmas, Thanks & Good Luck in this contest.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous