even though this story has been told countless times, it wasn't that bad. However you need to watch homophones. You know two words that sound the same but are spelled differently. At one point you wrote:
"Not a sole was traveling the road." This would make it the bottom of a shoe. I did understand that you meant one person but the proper word in this case is soul.
We have to see how New Years goes for the 2 of them. If he's as Rich as it sounds and has Checked her out . He would know she wants to run a Buisness. So maybe sex and Buisness will Mix?
Nicely done. It may be a story that has been told countless times, but it’s always nice to see it with new twists. Merry Christmas, Thanks & Good Luck in this contest.
English
Very hot
This story is very good, I loved it!
Watch the homophones
even though this story has been told countless times, it wasn't that bad. However you need to watch homophones. You know two words that sound the same but are spelled differently. At one point you wrote:
"Not a sole was traveling the road." This would make it the bottom of a shoe. I did understand that you meant one person but the proper word in this case is soul.
To Watch the homophones
Thank you for pointing out my mistake, I will becareful from now on.
Follow-Up
We have to see how New Years goes for the 2 of them. If he's as Rich as it sounds and has Checked her out . He would know she wants to run a Buisness. So maybe sex and Buisness will Mix?
A Most Enjoyable Read.
Nicely done. It may be a story that has been told countless times, but it’s always nice to see it with new twists. Merry Christmas, Thanks & Good Luck in this contest.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Sexy Christmas Day or
More submissions by MsGinger77.