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byBill Dada©
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by Anonymous

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by bluerains11/12/09

I read

this in one long breath..the words flowed well and I enjoyed the images...
bluerains

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by Levitating_Bed11/13/09

A ticklish ricochet

all around the inside of my head...

Your words are always like a gun fired in the hall of mirrors made of bulletproof glass.

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by EroticOrogeny11/13/09

interesting

I liked the images in the first part especially

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by vrosej1011/13/09

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I am deeply perplexed by this poem and enjoyed it immensely. This one is gunna stick with me a while, always an enjoyable thing.

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by tazz31705/15/12

BEING DRAGGED THROUGH AN ALLEY

of mud, sludge and dust. TK U MLJ LV NV

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